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On Wings of Lightning
The person who said that rushes toward them with all speed.

Banjo: Oh my God, I can't believe this... Canary Mary, it's you!
Canary Mary: Yes, it's me!! And look what the dynamic duo dragged in!!
Kazooie: Or in this case "up"...
Banjo: Well, I brought Lanky here with me, *Lanky waves* and here's my sister Tooty, *Tooty waves* and my good old pal Bottles, *Bottles adjusts his glasses*, and some more... u-unconventional guests.
Canary Mary: What brings you up here?
Lanky: !!!
Canary Mary: Awww, what's the matter? Canary got your tongue?
Lanky: I-it's just that... I don't actually... want to tell you why I'm up here with these guys.
Kazooie: Can't blame him. Last time we did that, Lanky got himself kidnapped.
Canary Mary: That's OK. You can just say you're up here for pleasure.
Banjo and Kazooie: *blushing*
Bottles: Guys!! *to Canary Mary* Now, assuming you've done some racing before, did they like it better in this "Glitter Gulch Mine" place, or here?
Canary Mary: They had an easier time in Glitter Gulch Mine. By the end of my second race here, they were just about ready to kill me.
Bottles: Kinda like that blast just up and murdered me! ...Before you ask, I'm not a zombie.
Kazooie: Yeah, yeah, then your brother took over and spoiled the fun by reading all the signs. Not to mention he was a lot meaner and ruder. And--
Bottles: Hey! Sgt. Jamjars may have been a bit rough on you, but he's overall a pretty neat guy!
Lanky: GUYS!!! I'm trying to think... What could we do to get rid of--
Banjo: *shushes Lanky* *whispering* If you mention his name, he'll come and find you somehow.
Lanky: I'm sorry.

Banjo--Kazooie - Classic Rareware
Donkey Kong Country and Donkey Kong 64 - Mostly Classic Rareware with minor help from :iconnintendo:
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Lanky Gets High
Gosh... I don't know if the bubble that leads to Cloudcuckooland and back can hold up to 10 people.

Anyway, here we are, at the highest point of the Isle o'Gags, a sky paradise full of strange sights not found anywhere else.

Lanky: Are you gonna tell William not to break the Fourth Wall this time?
Kazooie: If I tell him that doing it too much will upset the balance of the universe, will it make you happy?
Lanky: *nods*

So, Kazooie goes down the bubble. After a few minutes, she comes back up.

Kazooie: I'm back! I gotta say, that William fellow's not as bright as he is persistent. Swallowed my little white lie hook, line, and sinker!
High, shrill voice: Hey guys!!!

Someone wants to see them.

Banjo--Kazooie - Classic Rareware
Donkey Kong Country and Donkey Kong 64 - Mostly Classic Rareware with minor help from :iconnintendo:
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Journal History

[Lanky has an unusual hair pattern: His original dirty-blond has returned on the front part, while the rest of his hair is the scarlet he forcibly received as initiation to the Orang-Troops] They have a rare hair/fur colour
[] Their eyes are an unusual colour
[] This happens to be red
[] Their eyes change colour
[] (if a female) they have large boobs
[] (if a male) they are very muscular
[] They are very attractive to the opposite gender
[] They are very attractive to the same gender
[He used to not have very many friends, but that changed once he came to DK Isle] They have lots of friends/no friends
[A Swordfish named Enguarde] They have an unusual/unrealistic pet
[] They have a guardian spirit 
[] Some part of their body glows(that isn't supposed to glow in their species/race)
[Lanky's personality means that he's very happy] They are emo/cutesy
[] They have wings 
[Before Sparky threw the post-rescue party, Lanky always wore the Orang-Trooper uniform (with some minor changes)] They always dress like a certain 'label'
[] They look quite a bit like a character from a popular anime/manga
[Before the aforementioned party, Lanky had a patch on his overalls and he'd lost his shoes] They have a piece of jewelry/clothing that they always wear
Subtotal: 6

Relations

[] They have a twin/sibling that they were separated from at birth
[He used to fear Manky, but he learned to face that fear and reform him] They have an evil nemesis
[] Who is their sibling
[] They are from a very poor/lowly family
[] They are from a very rich/royal family
[] They don't know that they are from a very rich/royal background
[] They have lost one/both of their parents
[] They witnessed one/both of their parent's death/s
[] Who were killed by the OC's arch nemesis
[] Their parents are cruel, uncaring, abusive etc.
[] So they ran away from home, and somehow fell in with a famous hero, or bumped into an infamous villain who promptly became their arch nemesis
[His parents, in a bout of stupidity, sent him off to the Orang-Troops much earlier than he should have] Their parents were fine, but they ran away from home anyway, seeking adventure
[Lanky might seem like he's 18 due to his tall physique, but he's actually 15] They look much younger/older than they really are.
[] They never knew their parents
[His mother would always comfort him with a song when he got scared, and that was before the Orang-Troops came about] They were abused/spoiled as a child
[He has feelings for Winky Kong] They are currently in a relationship
Subtotal: 5

Race/Species

[] They are possessed by an angel
[He had a demon living inside of him named Sapphire, but the amount of overwhelming love was enough to vanquish him] They are possessed by a demon
[He tried to sing that song to make the monster in his head go away, but it was no good] But they struggle to be good anyway
[] They are a mythical creature
[] They are an alien
[] They are part mythical creature
[] They are part alien
[] They are a race/species that is discriminated against/misunderstood
[] They are a mythical creature/alien who was raised by human parents
[] And they grew up thinking they were human
[] They are the last of their kind
Double your points if they are descended from two or more kinds of mythical creatures/aliens
Subtotal: An exception is to be made here: 2

Powers

[] They are telekinetic/pyrokinetic/etc
[] They have sixth sense/can mind-read/etc
[He drank a potion that gave him the power of stretchy arms] They have an object of some sort that gives them powers
[Those aforementioned silly stretchy arms] They have a special ability/power
[] But they don't know about it yet
[That potion he drank] They were bestowed/cursed with these powers
[If it counts, he can stretch his arms quite a bit] They can grow extra body parts/shapeshift 
[] They are immortal(cannot be killed by conventional means)
[] They can summon spirits/demons/angels etc. 
[He's just now found out that his soul also houses an inner demon who looks like him, he named this demon Sapphire] They have a 'special type' of soul
[] Their soul is not the same as them
[] They can talk to spirits/ghosts (Anyone can talk TO spirits; it's getting them to talk back that is the hard part)
[] They have a certain power that is misunderstood/feared
[Whenever a new visitor comes to DK Isle, Lanky can determine their intentions via a quick hallucination] Certain noises/smells/situations/etc make their powers activate/give them a nervous breakdown
Subtotal: 5.5

Mentality

[] They have a mental disorder
[] They have an emotional disorder
[] They struggle to stay sane
[] They talk about their struggle to stay sane a lot
[] They are a psycho
[] They have multiple personalities(x2 if this is shown to be funny)
[Lanky's learned a lot] They are very intelligent
[] They are not smart, but in a funny way, and somehow always manage to find the hidden switch/secret door
[Just because Sapphire's gone doesn't mean Lanky doesn't see things from time to time] They have hallucinations
[] They are very mysterious/dark
[It fits his jokey personality] They are very lively/happy
[But whatever you do, don't make him angry] Their mood changes a lot/very quickly
[] They are very patient
Subtotal: 4

Miscellaneous

[The longer his arms stretch, the more they can endure] They are physically strong
[] They have lots of morals and state them a fair bit. For example: 'I would rather be with my friends than with my boyfriend/girlfriend' 'Nothing matters more to me than my friends/family' 'I wouldn't hesitate to die in place of a friend' etc. It's fine if your OC has these beliefs/values, but if they constantly say them out loud/preach them to others, then we have a problem.
[] They have a rare/unusual name
[] They were born on an important date, such as New Year's Eve, Midsummers Night, The Winter Solstace etc.
[] They are connected with a certain element
[] They are connected with a certain animal
[] They live/lived on the streets at some point in their lives
[The notorious Orang-Troopers and their ring-leader Kei] They are hiding from someone/something
[] They have a rare blood type 
[] They cry blood
[Lanky was an ordinary kid from Florida before he joined the Orang-Troops and subsequently the Kongs] They are from a different country to where they live
[] They are from a long line of ninjas/magical princesses/paladins/ad nauseum
[] They come from two such lines
[] Which have been at war for all of history
[] But are now at peace because of the OCs parents who loved each other in defiance of their families' hatred, showing them there was a better way (my god, I can't count how many time I've seen this)
[It turns out, Lanky actually forgot everything he was scared of before the initiation, no thanks to Sapphire] They have amnesia
[] They have some sort of permanent medical condition
[] The have a curse upon them
[] They are involved in some sort of prophecy
[] They are 'the chosen one'
Subtotal: 4

Total: 26.5


Point Reductions

Take points off your OCs overall score if they fit any of the following statements:

[] They smoke
[] They are an alcoholic
[] They are overweight
[] They are addicted to drugs
[] They have a short temper
[] They enjoy bullying others
[] They do not care much about others
[] They are emotionless
[] They are stupid, in an unfunny way
[] They are unattractive
Total Reduction: 0


Final Total: 26.5

<5 -Anti-Sue
Your character may be a bit on the boring side. No reason a character scoring this low can't be a a fascinating and exciting character, but generally if they are scoring this low, it wouldn't hurt to 'spice them up' a bit.

6-15 -Balanced Character
If your OC scored around here, then they are probably quite a well-balanced and interesting character. Those scoring in the higher end of this category may be a bit too much though.

16-25 -Borderline Mary-Sue
You probably need to tone your character down; characters that score this high tend to annoy people.

26> -Mary-Sue 
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Oi.. thanks 4 the watch pal :D
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Swert by ArtSkullz  : thanks for faving my undertale meme!
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N-no problem, I guess?
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Thats Overthankgod by ArtSkullz : didn't expect my shit-posting to be faved but its awesome! 
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Thanks for the watch!
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suck my logs
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Gross, no. I would never do that.
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